#1- As
you know in CrowdFunding, video is your business plan , business model ,
branding and you pitch . Place that you create trust after all people are
investing pre order base and have to feel comfortable and want to trust you .
We
graded the video at 45 /100 . Please refer to this web pages and make sure you
watch the videos and redo the video on your re launch .
#2-
Video and campaign are not optimized . See a sample for an ongoing project that
we are now supporting . . We could not find your video on the YouTube
#3-
Campaign title : Men Dilemmas: Custard Sisters Production , needs to be updated
. The goal is to have a short pitch / a tag line / a catch phrase attractive
and interesting . Your production company name can be mentioned in the Bio
#4- We
like your elevator message : A Web Series on how men cope with life
experiences. See how men handle issues ranging from relationships to finance.
#5- We
like the campaign description and awards but due to Video , people will not get
to the text and picture content